Saturday, July 2, 2011

Haunted Cries Comments

Rating: 4.9

I cry as I write this poem
I cry as I lift the blade from my wrist
I wish I never did exist
The pain is endless
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Broken heart emo
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Yours Forever X 12 January 2013

i definately agree with aqeb i dont think i could have described it any better!

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Paul Butters 13 November 2011

Wonderful poem: such emotion.

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Aqeb Benazir 22 August 2011

'I cry as I write this poem I cry as I lift the blade from my wrist I wish I never did exist The pain is endless It rushes through my body And my heart aches It increases second by second' this is...wow, you expressed pain so deeply! ! Heartbreaking and kind of really miserable!

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Kyle Youngblood 01 August 2011

Great poem! My eyes started to water when I was reading it...

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Urshula Davis 11 July 2011

This is nice i love the words and i also want to save you when i read it humm it really got my attention! !

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