Monday, April 30, 2012

Haunted Comments

Rating: 5.0

Vast open spaces
empty places
haunted souls
erie whispers and moans
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persian khushi
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Gone Gone 03 May 2012

im listening to THE XX - STARS, and im reading your poEm at the same time, and its amazing the images i get in my head, mixing your words and sounds together. erie feeling to it, sort of a floating, ghostly ffeel, like free.i dont know how to explain it but wow, i like the feeling. its a great piece, really wel done. another song that goes well with it is from the same album a track called - FANTASY. YOUR WORDS MIXED WITH the melody has a trance effect.AMAZING, well done.

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Dave Walker 30 April 2012

A fantastic poem, love it.

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