Sunday, September 13, 2009

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Time,
Most say,
Can heal all wounds.
Time, time, Damn! Time can’t heal.
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Madelene Calalo
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Danzen D. 19 September 2009

I agree with them all...emotions expressed, moving writing flow...exceptional. Keep writing!

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Lorena Cruz 17 September 2009

emotions were strongly expressed.. nice one... keep on rocking..

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Jemima Cabanlong 15 September 2009

a very moving poem, yes, strong emotions. way to go, expressing yourself that well! ! hehe. keep writing. :)

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Nashy Lamen 13 September 2009

Strong emotions... Nice choice of words.. I like the structure of the poem.. Nicely written! .. :)

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Rebecca Parkinson 13 September 2009

I quite liked that poem, it was rather well written and the description was just right, not too much to bore me and make me go 'lords sake, do I have to read the rest of this? ' but enough not to make me go 'ugh, where is the description? Am I to imagine nothing! ? '

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