Haunt Comments

I agree with them all...emotions expressed, moving writing flow...exceptional. Keep writing!

emotions were strongly expressed.. nice one... keep on rocking..

a very moving poem, yes, strong emotions. way to go, expressing yourself that well! ! hehe. keep writing. :)

Strong emotions... Nice choice of words.. I like the structure of the poem.. Nicely written! .. :)

I quite liked that poem, it was rather well written and the description was just right, not too much to bore me and make me go 'lords sake, do I have to read the rest of this? ' but enough not to make me go 'ugh, where is the description? Am I to imagine nothing! ? '