Saturday, August 13, 2016

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Rating: 5.0

Blood on the horizon
Dripping crimson red
Flashbacks from the past
Spinning in our heads
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Lawerence Mize, Sr.
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Susan Williams 14 September 2016

Very well-structured with words well-chosen for their directness. Definitely value your message. Well done, Lawerence.

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Smoky Hoss 13 September 2016

Man! I like this one very much. It hits the bulls eye dead-center. So true, so right on. And that last stanza is awesome. Great poem! ! !

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Lawerence Mize, Sr.

Lawerence Mize, Sr.

Baltimore, Maryland
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