Hatred Comments

So, is 'doubt' the daughter of hatred? ? This poem is not very clear to me. I see you started to follow me. Where is my ice cream? : )

Re: 'Yet here I lie in turmoil covered in with a stench of sorrow', I would delete either 'in' or 'with'. I think it was an oversight on your part. I don't always catch MY mistakes. bri : )

Ha! PH let me leave comments elsewhere for this poem; THAT was odd. Here (on the 'normal' page for comments) I DO see stars.

" Avenge us /We are weak in our voices /But our strength resides in your spirit."powerful poem

Read your poem once or twice more, tell me you have, and I might read it again and comment more. Welcome to PH 'new poet'. : ) bri