Hatred Comments

I see your overall idea on how hatred affects you, i like the concept. Try less repetition on the next one, but good job!

Greatttt Job i love it!

heey, just read your poems. :) they are really good. and dont worry im new here to and YOUR POEMS ARE AMAZING! ; D

Hey, you messaged me wanting to know if I could read some of your work and don't worry I'm new here too but I wanted to say wow your poem is really good! XD

You seem to have some unnecessary lines that you wrote just to make the poem longer and it kind is redundant by the end. Maybe you could get more figurative and paint hatred in an unusual way. Check out my poems please! !

I like that keep up with the writing. You described hatred so well in this poem to be so young and to write on such an important topic

nice poem, describes aptly how hatred feels and what it does to you