Monday, March 6, 2006

Hatred Comments

Rating: 2.9

The thing that burns my soul
An everlasting fire
The thing that takes its toll
Tearing at my desire
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Jake Gassiot
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Gabriella Franco 04 September 2006

The last stanza was beautiful! ! ! I love you its a sort of positive yet dangerous cliff-hanger, off you go! wonderful! ! Loving it Gabriela

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