Tuesday, August 12, 2008

Hatred Comments

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Such a word can cause so much pain
Can become like our own name
If it's allowed it will swallow our life
And cause us such strife
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Stacy S...
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Gutter Box 23 December 2008

Great poem...this u show a lot of emotions in this poem...great job

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Keith Foley 12 August 2008

Good poem about a tough subject. But I refuse to water hatred, choking it out before it grows. No fuel, no fire. You are right about the pain part. Keep writing.

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