Wednesday, July 17, 2013

Hatin' On My Cornflakes Comments

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You don't know what a friend makes
All up in yo cornflakes
Get out of yo cornflakes
Rather eat a plate of steak
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Jordan Myrie
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Bri Edwards 10 July 2014

this is catchy, and i like rhyming. thanks for the poet's note. i'm not sure the poem makes too much sense to me, especially the parts with 'hate' and 'friend makes', but i still like it. this is 'the jealous somebody' speaking to you? or you to her/him? i wonder if they were jealous of your love of cornflakes, or? thanks for sharing. :) bri

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