Sunday, July 26, 2009

Haters Hate An Ace Comments

Rating: 5.0

My life is a like a race
Through a maze
Where I keep the pace
To avoid being in haze
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Ronald Doku
COMMENTS
Siglinde Good 02 August 2009

The rhyming flows phenomenally. A fantastically confident poem that 'blossoms like a flower in a vase! ' You've struck the ace, I think!

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Obinna Eruchie 31 July 2009

How interesting, the piece was well emphasised.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 30 July 2009

Nice race of words, rhythm and rhyme. An enjoyable read.

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~ Jon London ~ 28 July 2009

Rhythm and Rhyme etched into every line...makes this piece an enjoyable find...nicely done Ron.....keep up the good work

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Jaye Jacobs 27 July 2009

wow. nice poem. i cant believe you founf that many words that rhyme.

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Chitra - 27 July 2009

the last 2 lines are a testimony to your fine poetic skills i really enjoyed this wordy race, you truly are an ace!

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