Sunday, February 2, 2014

Hate...Will Cause Loss Comments

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Should we hate for what we have lost
Hate for those who have taken what is not theirs
Hate is pain
Hate is evil
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Chinedu Dike 15 March 2017

Beautiful writing, you're are a humanist Lyn. The divinely ordained duty of human heart is to love, but somehow man has continued to burden his heart with hatred... Thanks for this wonderful poem and do remain blessed.

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Ken E Hall 19 August 2015

Hate will eat at your own heart the perpetrator of the cause will have no worries...You have to just accept and rebuild a new tomorrow...perfect poem on this subject and the last line says it all. You make the reader think hard into the cause of helping mankind...regards

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Amitava Sur 15 February 2014

A lovely poem with a wise message.This world is muddled today only because of jealousy and hatred. With your words.............. Hate will cause loss Not gain ....... thank you Lyn.

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Valsa George 08 February 2014

Hatred leads to anger and similar negative emotions and is more like an acid that corrodes the container in which it is kept! Love is the antidote to hatred! Great message, Lyn!

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Dee Corpolongo 06 February 2014

Excellent words (advice) given here, as hate will destroy you from the inside out. As wronged and as hurt that we may be, only time seems to soften the pain for me. But to know that there has been another lesson learnt, helps us to avoid once again getting burnt....If we have gained wisdom. Thank you Lyn, for writing this great poem of another learned lesson in life.

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 February 2014

Very Positive poem...Very true said...Hate will cause only loss. Yes, one have to overcome hate, sometimes they are very tough to overcome. But for bringing peace to self, one has to accept and make efforts to rebuild a new tomorrow. Superb write. Loved reading it.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 03 February 2014

hatred breeds hatred, leads to a blind alley, and self-damage is the only tangible gain. brought it out superbly, Lyn.

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