Time introduce me to you
You, me from future
You are the same person
The person who know everything about me, my fears, my flaws, what others dont, my unwritten soul
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2) In Running From Safety, the elder Richard Bach encounters his nine-year old self. The exchanges between them are out of this world. Just like your poetry, Soul! And your wonderful feedback!
What a great poem, Soul! It reminds me very much of Richard Bach's books. Although he is mostly known for Jonathan Livingston Seagull, his other ones are great.
This is brilliant. I often find myself saying, 'I wish I knew then what now I know.' A masterpiece, Soul.
We realise many a things during our birthday, when happy mood reveals the truth secretly to us. Your poem is falwless in flow and feelings.5****
This is a very, very deep and personal poem in which you project your inner self. You rely on someone else that is very close to understand them and the world around you and even yourself, A poem so personal and rich it deserves several careful readings.
Truly inspirational and motivational! The last two stanzas have a special significance now. I will use their wisdom in assisting my youngest nephew with his homeschooling. A world of THX to you, Soul!