Wednesday, October 22, 2014

Hate Me Not- - Comments

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If i fail to live peacefully, make peace with my heart
If i fail to root for you one day, don't leave me just yet
If one day i'm afraid and let go, Please beg me to stay
If that one sour day shall passed, Darling forsake me not
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Roseann Shawiak 03 November 2014

I found a comfortable sadness within this poem, finding myself wanting you to meet up with your love, yet knowing that it would not be for now. Searching for a lost love with a deep and abiding passion. Very beautiful and well written poem. Touching and tender throughout. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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