Friday, July 10, 2009

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I HATE IT WHEN YOU MAKE ME CRY,
I HATE IT WHEN YOU MAKE ME WANT TO DIE,
I HATE IT WHEN YOU ARE RIGHT
AND WHEN YOU ALWAYS WANT TO FIGHT
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LUZAAN de Bruyn
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Great rhythm with this poem Luzaan. The end as Erika says is brilliant! Karin Anderson

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Silent Speaker 10 July 2009

I LOVE the way this poem ends.Brilliant! ! ! ! ! ! !

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