Thursday, August 25, 2011

Hate Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just like the sun rises and sets each day.
So will my hatred continually eat away.
Until everything is gone.
And all that is left are the pictures I've drawn.
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Vasto Grom
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Godfrey Morris 05 March 2015

I sense a lot of anger in your poems. I think this is a great way to let it go. Let your anger be your fuel.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 04 September 2011

HATRED SHOULD BE TURNED TO LOVE GO SHOW IT GO EXPRESS IT AND WHEN IT IS DONE AND WHEN IT IS GONE LOVE WILL RULE YOUR HEART APART FROM THIS I FEEL THE INTENSITY OF YOUR POEM IN YOUR WORDS AND IN THE THEME YOU WROTE ABOUT NICE LINES NICE POEM.

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Ameera Aidrus 01 September 2011

wow.....awsum lines! ! ! !

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Vasto Grom

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