Sunday, January 4, 2009

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Rating: 4.8

See all the bodies piled up there?
So sad, nobody's left to care
Look at them all now, watch them rot
So pretty and unique, are they not?
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Jackie Idler
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Keith Hendrickson 07 January 2009

WOW! ! ! ! very powerful piece.. i loved the way it flowed.

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Aljazi .q8 07 January 2009

Very organized poem! Loved it well done.

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Katie Pierce 04 January 2009

Wow. This poem is very strong and well, horrible! I like it a lot. It really gets your message across well. Keep writing about issues that are important to you!

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