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Bleeding pools of love once held
The infection spreads, my heart impelled
the soul slowly darkens, emotions decay
the unbearable pain i no longer delay
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Good job. I like the way that thoughts carry across the rhymed line endings into the following lines. Robert
Ewwww yikes...this one is dripping with the stuff...pure... raw...hatred. Very well written! (Wouldn't want to ever cross you though!) Hugs, Dee
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7/23/2025 7:39:31 PM # 1.0.0
...Very vengeful work Let em know dude... Let em know they're not forgotten ;)