Sunday, September 10, 2006

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Bleeding pools of love once held
The infection spreads, my heart impelled
the soul slowly darkens, emotions decay
the unbearable pain i no longer delay
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Evy Moore
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Leo Lopes 17 September 2006

...Very vengeful work Let em know dude... Let em know they're not forgotten ;)

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Robert Howard 11 September 2006

Good job. I like the way that thoughts carry across the rhymed line endings into the following lines. Robert

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Dee Daffodil 11 September 2006

Ewwww yikes...this one is dripping with the stuff...pure... raw...hatred. Very well written! (Wouldn't want to ever cross you though!) Hugs, Dee

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