Hate (11/7/08) Comments

you love him enough...but don't hate all those wonderful things you listed...your presentation i liked 10

very nice Kayleigh after the first few lines I thought just a typical subject from a 13 year old until I got to 'twirl and spin' and each line kept me going to the final double negative twist and I say 'superb' about this poem I also find humor in this poem because it speaks to the basic flaw of what I call 'image poetry' by expressing negative thoughts about the typical subjects I have found that the fans of image poetry are often overly serious about the style and its importance - to the degree of not recognizing other forms