Hatched By The Abyss Poem by Denis Mair

Hatched By The Abyss

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(for an image by Danaé Écarlate* and for one of her poetic fragments, see Note 2 below.**)
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The cosmos is inscrutable in its purpose,

perhaps related to highlighting energy states in consciousness:

discordance being represented by agony

and sustainable exchange by bliss.

There is an architecture of intense energy flows...

a ladder-like mesh extending from macrocosm down to fleshly organs.

Organismic development strapped us into the cosmic hot seat,

to be the privileged recipients of pulsating auroras;

in an utter involution haloed by a gathering vortex,

a spiral bract of shimmers is routed through a switchboard of sentience,

tugged by notional declivity toward a vibratory ordeal,

destined for the harrowing reward and culminating cash out,

exposed to final noospheric exhalations,

given off by lifetimes of coalescence in their crumbling.
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{*Note 1: The image was posted by Danaé on FB, December 25.}

{**Note 2, here is Danaé', s accompanying poem:
'A gaping black hole, a cosmic vagina
I'm drowning in it, body with no mystical name
The moment explodes, an orgasm of nothingness
The emptiness f**ks me, its enjoyment is slow.…'}

Hatched By The Abyss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruth Walters 03 February 2025

Well, it was lost on me I'm afraid. I read your comment but even when I read it again it was hard to see the connection, especially from the way the poem starts.

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