Hasta La Vista Comments

I liked your words... I touched a profound meaning really great!

Reincarnation and sins, both of human acts who never lost after life. Nice and dept meaning poem.

Full of emotion and violence, extremely well portrayed.

Meaningful Write, well defined,

The 'Death arena cries and floods your sins' wow this poem has combined poetic technique and critical thinking, thanks for reminding me to read it i really liked it 10+

Matcha! This is an unusual poem from you; which so much power and surrealistic images, ghastly enshroudment..........terrific Matcha! You can do that(love) and this too with equal dexerity.

Wow very thought provoking

From: Mary Spain (United Kingdom ;) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 5/13/2009 2: 16: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: hi mary no sound no picture? ? ? The anger and the violence leap out of this poem, Sulaiman. Beautifully expressed, but please allow us a little hope! Mary

I love the way you have used your words, strong emotions coming through. Beautiful work man!

Sulaiman, honestly, WOW, very well written, absolutely awesome, loved the title, loved ypur well chosen words and your tone was sooooooooooo convincing, Brilliant and so artistic, you are truly gifted :) keep it up

Great, Great, Great! Bravo! bravo! nice piece, well planned and well written.

A lovely poem to read... great art piece! ! nice job Sulaiman 10.. Ali

The extract from Leland's comment: From: The Prophet Leland Wright (Washington DC United States; Male; 16) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 5/13/2009 9: 22: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Hasta La Vista Love the poem i love the last part 'When the lips of the skies Kiss the fragile ground Until the seeing Hasta la vista' That was like the icing on the cake i think i gave the poem 10/10 on the rating and since i can't i can't comment i just wanted to tell you good job on the poem and message me when you have more. And Sulaiman i know this is typical me but since you are one of my first poem hunter friends i am sure you won't mind reading one of my poems. Since it has been a while just look at some of my poems find the one or ones you like and comment. Thanks in advance

This is great, thanks for sharing.10+++

You are very creative in your descriptions. Vivid images and the thoughts provoke lingering thoughts about what you describe. Very well done.

You are very creative in your descriptions. Vivid images and the thoughts provoke lingering thoughts about what you describe. Very well done.

it is a good poem on the devastating effects of destructive violence, if allowed unchecked to go on indiscriminately. the title seems to be an allusion to that catchy phrase john taught model t-800 101 in terminator 2, one of the films in the terminator film franchise about terminators and various other characters traveling through time to either kill or protect John Connor before the events of Judgment Day unfold. the picture of this poem is well captured.

i can really realate to this piece and it is written beautifully....And it is a clear picture... :)

The sadness... the bitterness in your poem is felt, the expression of cruelty in mankind is well described by your excellent choice of poetic words, Great work!

terribly disturbing i m not sure what i feel about this yet...... but it is good