Sunday, September 8, 2013

Has Fate Forgotten? Comments

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Has fate forgotten?
Has that unspoken promise
forgotten to shake hands with time?
Its perspicacious presence
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Argentine Tango
COMMENTS
Suman Kumar Das 06 November 2013

Hi Argentine Tango, So beautifully worded & great thought! Thank You Regards, Suman

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Khairul Ahsan 24 September 2013

'So questions follow, hovering in between us like a breath on a winter morning, skipping between our words and burning holes in our palms ' Great expression! Liked it.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 15 September 2013

Anxiety well expressed.Psalms can hold palms well.

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Jonathan H. Scott 12 September 2013

Thought provoking. Thanks for sharing..

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Abhishek Mishra 10 September 2013

Very nice poem ma'm.. Loved it: -)

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East Sea Fairy East Sea Fairy 08 September 2013

a wonderful poem with fitanstic imago

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