Much more than a week
has now gone by
since I heard a word
from my friend Bri.
Has he gone on a cruise?
Was he hit by a train?
Oh, when will we hear
from our Bri again?
He was silent before,
a time or two,
and I thought for sure
his days were through.
Please make an appearance,
Bri, we can't rest.
We await further word
and hope for the best.
I noticed a typo and have fixed it, but it may take a few days for the change to show up.
Kim and others, Here are further words: HAPPY HALLOWEEN, may the spooky day be, for you all, SCARY. And may all chocolates in your candy box have in them a big CHERRY! ! ! : ) bri
For those not used to dealing in miles,9 miles is almost 14.5 kilometers.
My small error corrected now: Bri may only use the PC as many times as his wife ALLOWS him (she is of course a bossy and jealous wife
Things have changed. She now no longer allows him to use her computer at all. He has to go to the public library 9 miles away and use the computer there.
With friend like you he won't stay away too long. He is life of poetry or vice versa.
Thanks to all members who have helped to make me the most celebrated [[ or clebated? ? ]] poem of at times. THANKS.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very well crafted and executed poem, Kim as always. Wonderful and spontaneous presentation with nice rhyme and rhythm.
Rose Marie, you are so kind. Thank you very much.
I KNOW KIM MUST HAVE BEEN ROSE MARIE'S 'GHOST WRITER'! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! bri : )