Has Bri Gone Bye-Bye? Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Has Bri Gone Bye-Bye?

Rating: 4.6

Much more than a week
has now gone by
since I heard a word
from my friend Bri.

Has he gone on a cruise?
Was he hit by a train?
Oh, when will we hear
from our Bri again?

He was silent before,
a time or two,
and I thought for sure
his days were through.

Please make an appearance,
Bri, we can't rest.
We await further word
and hope for the best.

Has Bri Gone Bye-Bye?
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My friend Bri Edwards was communicating with me almost every day, but has had no activity since April 25.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A very well crafted and executed poem, Kim as always. Wonderful and spontaneous presentation with nice rhyme and rhythm.

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Kim Barney 16 May 2024

Rose Marie, you are so kind. Thank you very much.

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Bri Edwards 26 October 2024

I KNOW KIM MUST HAVE BEEN ROSE MARIE'S 'GHOST WRITER'! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! bri : )

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Kim Barney 11 May 2024

I noticed a typo and have fixed it, but it may take a few days for the change to show up.

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Bri Edwards 26 October 2024

Kim and others, Here are further words: HAPPY HALLOWEEN, may the spooky day be, for you all, SCARY. And may all chocolates in your candy box have in them a big CHERRY! ! ! : ) bri

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Kim Barney 25 September 2024

For those not used to dealing in miles,9 miles is almost 14.5 kilometers.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 August 2024

My small error corrected now: Bri may only use the PC as many times as his wife ALLOWS him (she is of course a bossy and jealous wife

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Kim Barney 04 August 2024

Things have changed. She now no longer allows him to use her computer at all. He has to go to the public library 9 miles away and use the computer there.

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Savita Tyagi 01 June 2024

With friend like you he won't stay away too long. He is life of poetry or vice versa.

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Bri Edwards 30 May 2024

Thanks to all members who have helped to make me the most celebrated [[ or clebated? ? ]] poem of at times. THANKS.

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