Sunday, July 3, 2005

Has-Been Comments

Rating: 3.7

What does it matter if someone
Likes boys instead of girls
It definitely doesn't mean that
They must wear their hair in twirls
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Jeremy Williams
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Joy Vanderhelm 13 November 2005

I love it! Poetry can always serve as a messanger in my opinion. It tells stories and reveals truths and displays emotions. I love the message in this poem.

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Uriah Hamilton 18 July 2005

I by all means dig the message of being open-minded and opposing hate! I kind of think the last two lines may need more work, though.

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