Friday, January 9, 2009

Has Been Long Since... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Has been long since I had a fight,
Has been long since I did a write,

Has been long since I was offended to compete,
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Dhanesh (trying to be) poet
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Ted M 04 July 2009

You have a natural and simplicity in your writing which makes it very nice to read.

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Hemant Paralkar 29 May 2009

Duniya jise kahte hai jadoo ka ek khilona hai, mile toh mitthi na mile toh sona(gold) hai............... Carry on dear............ i liked this one.................

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Amit Gokhale 20 January 2009

pratyek jan apalya anubhvatun, jagala kahitari shikavun jata, ani tey anubhavi bol shikatana, balpan kuthlya kuth harvun jata, Nice to read it for it has awaken all those sweet and cherishing memories of my childhood too.............

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Yaseen Anwer 15 January 2009

Dude U must feel proud of this piece of work being a poet!

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Neha Aradhye 11 January 2009

the reader will definitely appreciate u, dude... u just sit at some place & there u go-ur done wit a new poem of an excursive taste... well done...Keep it up...

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Anjali Sinha 09 January 2009

has been long since we spoke to each other has been long since -- wow nice thoughts which must have just spilt out -- +++++++10 anjali

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Kesav Easwaran 09 January 2009

has been long...yes; so long...so you wrote this down...now you would be able to say it hasn't been that long i wrote about all those things i did back long! a nice write frank original crazy and crispy...10

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