Tuesday, June 12, 2012

Harvest Time (Prayer Prayer Prayer Prayer) Comments

Rating: 2.8

The grapes are ready
The wheat stands ripe
Rear end is coming
May be here tonight
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Udiah (witness to Yah)
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Patricia Grantham 12 March 2015

An uplifting and very spiritual write. Full of wisdom and many truths. Good.

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Ramesh Rai 22 October 2014

Ya! so many gems are carved.Fantastic.

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David Harris 25 July 2014

great poem, good rhythm.

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Colleen Courtney 25 June 2014

Although I love the poem I'm curious about the next to the last stanza. I know you were trying to keep the rhyming rhythm going but wouldn't it be wiser for God to be guiding those who do wrong rather then those who do right? We all need the continuous guidance of our higher power but I can't help feeling those who are lost need him /her more than those who are pretty much following the right path. Just a thought!

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Kevin Quero 09 March 2014

Cool poem, keep it up check out my poems.

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Richard Hogan 22 February 2013

Great poem, keep it up,

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Lindo Mvelase 03 October 2012

gr8 poem, end of times. well penned, well expressed, I was engrosed throughout

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