The clouds are pulling at the corners.
My perfect blue sky,
(pinned in place with
barbed comments,
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Very good stuff, I think! Worthy of an award from Mt Olympus. No kidding, you have the poet's touch! Over dramatic and aberrant as the best poets are! You don't fly off into the blue and gush as some do! You may be a weed freshly bloomed, like one of those neglected flowers in a poem by William Carlos Williams! Please write more! Regards, Michael
another brilliant poem! I wish i could write half as well as you