Tuesday, June 24, 2008

Harvest The Clouds Comments

Rating: 4.5

The clouds are pulling at the corners.
My perfect blue sky,
(pinned in place with
barbed comments,
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Delilah Miller
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Adam Holmes 02 July 2008

another brilliant poem! I wish i could write half as well as you

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Michael Pruchnicki 24 June 2008

Very good stuff, I think! Worthy of an award from Mt Olympus. No kidding, you have the poet's touch! Over dramatic and aberrant as the best poets are! You don't fly off into the blue and gush as some do! You may be a weed freshly bloomed, like one of those neglected flowers in a poem by William Carlos Williams! Please write more! Regards, Michael

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Delilah Miller

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