In the rural, green landscape of your birth place of County Offaly,
Driving down it's winding roads with the serenity of the Slieve Bloom mountains
Conquering the views from every angle,
Birds sing with a lyrical beauty
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As we sow, so we reap. Better to sow the seeds of love then the harvest will be love. Nicely composed with beautiful articulation of nature. Thanks for sharing. Regards. +++++++10
In this poem, i can see the red and blue tones...a mixture of happy and sad, and taste the bitter of coffee..still we love to that past...and i really like how you bring the story so sounding like a victory..a strength to observe and care :) ..nice as always :)
a nice painting of true love, a lovely reference of natural beauty makes it colorful.
Dashing the metaphors which depict the large scene of an intimate soul's universe.
Your are a great story teller, I love the visuals you portray within your words. Annette.
A beautiful poem capturing the essence of love as we grow older and mature. Many a line in the poem are breathtaking for e.g. I now swim with freedom in your soft blue eyes, To discover there is our time and a better way.'
This poem puts a smile in an autumn heart! It is good for youngsters to know there still can be fire and passion in the later years of life. It is like wisdom harvests a reward and love becomes both compassion and passion, both blazing fire and warm ember. Love how you put these feelings in a physical setting in your homeland that is so much a part of your soul and your writing. I've never been to County Offaly or, Driving down it's winding roads with the serenity of the Slieve Bloom mountains Conquering the views from every angle, but you make me yearn to walk your land, Hazel Durham! Very very very good write! 10+
A nice inscription has has been made on true love. The last stanza is much impressive. Thanks for sharing this gem with us.10