Thursday, April 6, 2006

Harsh Words Comments

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Harsh words and violent blows
Hidden secrets nobody knows
Eyes are open, hands are fisted
Deep inside I`m warped and twisted
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Shannon Edelman
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Elya Thorn 06 April 2006

Wow, this poem is just great, such a great musicality to it! and I love the imagery and the expressions you used! 10! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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