Morn sky caked with smog
Sun concealed in misty lair
Foggy thoughts in mind.
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i personnaly believ that its very difficult to write a haiku well depicted beauty of wnter morning 10
lovely- you have captured well the grim harsh winter inner and outer landscape.10
It is small world An indian lady writing japanesse forms in english and makinga fine job of it
the beauty about something harsh is expressed so splendidly with the economy of word and the soul of a HAIKU keep it up!
a perfect delineation of how weather affects ones moods.....with fog upon the horizon thoughts too are grey...good job!
i always like Haiku's as with such less words so much is said.... u did a perfect job here... when time permit read my 'Shades of Nature' its kind of haiku....
Even though I'm not a haiku writer, I love them and everytime I read one as descriptive in so very few words as this, I am reminded over again why they are such powerful pieces. ***10*** Be Well
The readers is getting the original essence of haiku. Please read my poems if possible. Thanks a lot. Tapas Baidya, Kolaghat, Purba Medinipur, W.B., India.
you wrote so less but spoke so much. i loved this poem. you said alot without even having to write much. a 10 for you! great job
very original and fresh poem! keep writing! could you read my haiku-style poems too? Thank you.
i think that's a very pretty poem, i loved it 10! ~Hazel G.E.
Your images are extraordinary. Lovely work. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra
This is so sensible & sensuous....terrific work...10
very creative poem few words were enough to give a huge meaning Great
That sounds so pleasant! Why then is harsh in the title?