Wednesday, September 10, 2008

Harsh Winter(Haiku) Comments

Rating: 4.8

Morn sky caked with smog
Sun concealed in misty lair
Foggy thoughts in mind.
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koyel mitra
COMMENTS
<font color=black>Nagourta 13 November 2008

That sounds so pleasant! Why then is harsh in the title?

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Rakhi Jayashankar 04 October 2008

i personnaly believ that its very difficult to write a haiku well depicted beauty of wnter morning 10

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Mamta Agarwal 30 September 2008

lovely- you have captured well the grim harsh winter inner and outer landscape.10

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Indira Babbellapati 28 September 2008

.........................good show, young lady!

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Ivor Hogg 26 September 2008

It is small world An indian lady writing japanesse forms in english and makinga fine job of it

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Reetessh Sabrr 26 September 2008

the beauty about something harsh is expressed so splendidly with the economy of word and the soul of a HAIKU keep it up!

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Tanya Stanford 22 September 2008

Absolutely brilliant way to express winter. Loved it.

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 19 September 2008

a perfect delineation of how weather affects ones moods.....with fog upon the horizon thoughts too are grey...good job!

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Deepti Agarwal 18 September 2008

i always like Haiku's as with such less words so much is said.... u did a perfect job here... when time permit read my 'Shades of Nature' its kind of haiku....

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Nathaniel Booker 15 September 2008

Even though I'm not a haiku writer, I love them and everytime I read one as descriptive in so very few words as this, I am reminded over again why they are such powerful pieces. ***10*** Be Well

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Tapas Baidya 15 September 2008

The readers is getting the original essence of haiku. Please read my poems if possible. Thanks a lot. Tapas Baidya, Kolaghat, Purba Medinipur, W.B., India.

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Shilesha Johnson 12 September 2008

you wrote so less but spoke so much. i loved this poem. you said alot without even having to write much. a 10 for you! great job

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Tom Balch 12 September 2008

Nicely done in few 10/10 regards Tom

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 11 September 2008

very original and fresh poem! keep writing! could you read my haiku-style poems too? Thank you.

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Ivor Hogg 11 September 2008

Excellent haiku string

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Evaughn Gray 10 September 2008

i think that's a very pretty poem, i loved it 10! ~Hazel G.E.

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Sandra Fowler 10 September 2008

Your images are extraordinary. Lovely work. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 10 September 2008

Stunning....beautiful 10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 10 September 2008

This is so sensible & sensuous....terrific work...10

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samar Halabi 10 September 2008

very creative poem few words were enough to give a huge meaning Great

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