Saturday, January 21, 2012

Harsh Reality... Comments

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The whole room disappeared
I was left
small and insignificant
staring at the floor of my soul
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chantelle ribeiro
breathe Staring Leaving coldness
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Simon Collins 12 May 2012

Nice descriptive feeling, thankyou

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Pheko Motaung 20 February 2012

Outstanding lineA wanderer in the desert of harsh reality And I myself has been a wanderer in the desert of harsh reality and what she did to me was painful! Actually it happened some three months ago.But now and having read this soaring masterpiece I feel comforted.Thank you very much your beautiful poem has helped lift the burden of gloom of my shoulders!

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South Africa - Johannesburg
chantelle ribeiro
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South Africa - Johannesburg
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