Wednesday, March 12, 2008

Harper's Ferry Comments

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A bell tolled
through the fog at dusk
to summon passage
across the roiling waters.
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Robert Charles Howard
fog
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Not a member No 4 25 March 2008

You've loaded this one with the weight of history Robert. Every line carries its emotive burden to perfection - concentrating the years, the costs and the lessons. Marvellous poem sir! It must rank amongst your finest. jim

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Sandra Fowler 24 March 2008

The bell tolling through the fog at dusk resonates with this reader. Very compelling and beautiful Robert. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Duncan Wyllie 23 March 2008

This reminds me of a voyage across a difficult time or event and yet when you'd reached the other side you had become stronger for it Very passionate writing Robert...well done! Love duncan X

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Goldy Locks 12 March 2008

With Audette, Frank & Coach. Definitely, Robert. You have style about you, eminent and sublime. best care, susan jane xx

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Chuck Audette 12 March 2008

Wow, loved the sense of trepidation and otherworldly atmosphere you created in this one! -chuck

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Smooooooth, crisp & tightly constructed work, Robert. Intriguing storyline...Solid crafting. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Coach Roth 12 March 2008

Images of Charon and the river Styx between your lines...nice write...Coach

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Robert Charles Howard

Robert Charles Howard

Wyandotte MI
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