Tuesday, February 19, 2008

Harmony Ii (The Fourth True Love) Comments

Rating: 4.5

Yes, it shall be remembered,
Long after we are gone;
How much I loved her truly,
Till we were called upon.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
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Cristy Upshaw 29 May 2009

bravo, hun, very endearing and enlightening piece. so enjoyed.

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Mamta Agarwal 01 April 2009

lovely composition. one needs to be in harmony to discover the first three...is what i see fascinating, mamta

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C. P. Sharma 11 February 2009

I agree with James, really a Hall of Fame poem. So much said in so simple soul searching words. CP

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Norman Hale 05 July 2008

awesome writing here as well as many others that I've read of yours this happens to be the first one I could comment on lol keep'em comin

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Rhiannon Scase 02 July 2008

Another fantastic write! Keep up the good the work, I think your astounding! Rhiannon*

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Michael Koelliker 29 June 2008

and the crowd goes wild! loved it once again.

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Malini Kadir 23 June 2008

Yes.....having found it, you wish to cherish it for all eternity!

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Bianca B. 19 June 2008

Wonderful poem. you sure can express your feelings very well

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DELETED NOW 17 June 2008

oh how I love harmony...it's also a beautiful name for a girl...what do u think of vienna for a girls name?

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Who Iam 13 May 2008

Just returned from the hospital , sorry I was unable to vote again, but I see where I had done so sometime ago.The vote ticker was off, but certainly remain a ten! Ver good poem.

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Jesse Bauer 13 May 2008

Very good flow to this poem. Excellent use of words, good rhyming, good rhythm and a fantastic point to it. Great job with this one, very much enjoyed reading it.

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Jerry Hughes 10 May 2008

Wolfe, as a confirmed agnostic I dispute the concept of heaven - using it as a metaphor I go along with. In context nicely put my friend...

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Ernestine Northover 08 May 2008

Very nice Greenwolfe, peace, balance, harmony that is what we all need. Lovely ending to this write. A delight to read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Tsira Goge 07 May 2008

'The one that's formed in Heaven.' ................................................. I have read this the second time, and I wish to tell that really fine poems and your internal harmony is felt. .! 0..... Tsira

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Scarlett Treat 07 May 2008

Great recipe for what I would call 'abiding' love.....not just the instant attraction, but love that last...forever and always?

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Andrew Blakemore 20 April 2008

Another great poem, wonderful flow. Andrew

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Anna Cellmer 15 April 2008

Perfectly painted picture of this the most beautiful feeling we can find in this world and the end yes I can agree this all we feel on the way to love ends in the harmony, sweet and put me smiling

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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 13 April 2008

I like the 4 types of love you found and your descriptions of them

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Ernestine Northover 05 April 2008

Applause! ! Applause! ! It flowed so beautifully into my mind, gentle and consoling. Top marks. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Roger Naya 31 March 2008

Wonderfully written poems, both harmony I and II. It is a shame there isn't enough of your harmony in this world.

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