Yes, it shall be remembered,
Long after we are gone;
How much I loved her truly,
Till we were called upon.
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lovely composition. one needs to be in harmony to discover the first three...is what i see fascinating, mamta
I agree with James, really a Hall of Fame poem. So much said in so simple soul searching words. CP
awesome writing here as well as many others that I've read of yours this happens to be the first one I could comment on lol keep'em comin
Another fantastic write! Keep up the good the work, I think your astounding! Rhiannon*
Yes.....having found it, you wish to cherish it for all eternity!
oh how I love harmony...it's also a beautiful name for a girl...what do u think of vienna for a girls name?
Just returned from the hospital , sorry I was unable to vote again, but I see where I had done so sometime ago.The vote ticker was off, but certainly remain a ten! Ver good poem.
Very good flow to this poem. Excellent use of words, good rhyming, good rhythm and a fantastic point to it. Great job with this one, very much enjoyed reading it.
Wolfe, as a confirmed agnostic I dispute the concept of heaven - using it as a metaphor I go along with. In context nicely put my friend...
Very nice Greenwolfe, peace, balance, harmony that is what we all need. Lovely ending to this write. A delight to read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
'The one that's formed in Heaven.' ................................................. I have read this the second time, and I wish to tell that really fine poems and your internal harmony is felt. .! 0..... Tsira
Great recipe for what I would call 'abiding' love.....not just the instant attraction, but love that last...forever and always?
Perfectly painted picture of this the most beautiful feeling we can find in this world and the end yes I can agree this all we feel on the way to love ends in the harmony, sweet and put me smiling
I like the 4 types of love you found and your descriptions of them
Applause! ! Applause! ! It flowed so beautifully into my mind, gentle and consoling. Top marks. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Wonderfully written poems, both harmony I and II. It is a shame there isn't enough of your harmony in this world.
bravo, hun, very endearing and enlightening piece. so enjoyed.