Who cares about their color?
They'd twinkle anyway .
Someday they'll both have places
In Heaven's bright array.
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who cares- some do...wise know better lovely poem, beautiful last stanza Mamta
This has to be the sweetest poem I have read, not many men are able to put their feelings out like this
I wish all men could see the beauty within as you clearly do... Lovely rhymes to.
I love the way u rhyme it's actually something I'm working on and rhythm so I envy all that can write as beautifully as you. Make sure everyone knows about this one too so. Spread yourself! ! ! ! !
no matter what happens to change her appearance you would still love her the same good write
so very sweet that just says I dont only like you cause you're pretty
very thick with rhetoric, but the manner in which it is used works well. One can't always say that about question in verse. Can see why it was so popular. Thanks for sharing
That's lovely, a pleasure to read this one. Superbly constructed. Excellence written all over it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
This is a really goos poem, I DO like this one. Peace&♥ Jade[d]
There is an old Beatle's line that runs through my head when I read your poem. 'And I love her.' That sums it up. I like your poem because it emphasizes the essence of multidemensional person as being of great value to you.
Awesome write my friend! A true delight to read thank you! ! *10*! ! ! Best regards, Friend Thad
I like reading poetry with rhyme, It is more diffcult to craft...the choice of words is much more narrow, Giving the reader a pleasure.
what a wonderful way to look at another. true beauty is on the inside and if such beauty beholds it will shine all the way through. awesome piece.