Tuesday, February 19, 2008

Harmony I (Who Cares?) Comments

Rating: 4.8

Who cares about their color?
They'd twinkle anyway .
Someday they'll both have places
In Heaven's bright array.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
COMMENTS
Cristy Upshaw 29 May 2009

what a wonderful way to look at another. true beauty is on the inside and if such beauty beholds it will shine all the way through. awesome piece.

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Mamta Agarwal 01 April 2009

who cares- some do...wise know better lovely poem, beautiful last stanza Mamta

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Frieda Lumpkins 20 February 2009

This has to be the sweetest poem I have read, not many men are able to put their feelings out like this

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Tanya Stanford 13 August 2008

I wish all men could see the beauty within as you clearly do... Lovely rhymes to.

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Corey Threet 12 August 2008

I love the way u rhyme it's actually something I'm working on and rhythm so I envy all that can write as beautifully as you. Make sure everyone knows about this one too so. Spread yourself! ! ! ! !

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Anna jonson 04 August 2008

very beautiful i like your style

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James Harding 31 July 2008

no matter what happens to change her appearance you would still love her the same good write

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Chitra - 11 July 2008

truely wellpenned soulfool write

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Bianca B. 19 June 2008

so very sweet that just says I dont only like you cause you're pretty

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DELETED NOW 17 June 2008

that's the way to say u truly love someone.

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S... Che 12 June 2008

awww thats a very sweet poem. lucky girl

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Jamaya Ewing 09 May 2008

YO DIS iz hot u should continue u feel me

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Just Jes 29 April 2008

very thick with rhetoric, but the manner in which it is used works well. One can't always say that about question in verse. Can see why it was so popular. Thanks for sharing

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Andrew Blakemore 20 April 2008

A wonderfully constructed work. Well done. Andrew

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Ernestine Northover 05 April 2008

That's lovely, a pleasure to read this one. Superbly constructed. Excellence written all over it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Jade Nameless 31 March 2008

This is a really goos poem, I DO like this one. Peace&♥ Jade[d]

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William Jackson 19 March 2008

There is an old Beatle's line that runs through my head when I read your poem. 'And I love her.' That sums it up. I like your poem because it emphasizes the essence of multidemensional person as being of great value to you.

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Thad Wilk 04 March 2008

Awesome write my friend! A true delight to read thank you! ! *10*! ! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Howard Johnson 28 February 2008

I like reading poetry with rhyme, It is more diffcult to craft...the choice of words is much more narrow, Giving the reader a pleasure.

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Janri Gogeshvili 28 February 2008

Involves musical impulses … it is graceful …

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