Monday, June 4, 2018

Harmony! Comments

Rating: 5.0

When my heart, mind and soul
synched in harmony
my heart ruptured in rhythmic dance.
My whole being swirled in ecstasy of god.
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Geetha Jayakumar 18 June 2018

Short and sweet write with words of charm, pulling one towards ecstasy of God. Loved reading it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 June 2018

Captivating one. Though this poem is in brief yet it has poetic charmness. The theme is nice. The photograph you have provided is captivating too. Thanks for sharing.

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Aarzoo Mehek 14 June 2018

I appreciate your valuable feedback. Thank you for reading it.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 June 2018

I can feel the rupture of the poetic heart in rhythmic dance! A short elegant poem with powerful poetic expression! Appreciated…..10

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Aarzoo Mehek 14 June 2018

Thank you for reading my poem.

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Valsa George 10 June 2018

This harmony is hard to achieve, but once achieved it will lift one to a celestial plane when one feels so light and buoyant! A kind of levitation! ! The poem and the pictorial illustration.... both are equally captivating! A sure 10. Glad to see you back after a long interval!

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Aarzoo Mehek 14 June 2018

it's always nice to read your valuable feedback. Thank you so much. Glad to be back among my friends.

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Kostas Lagos 09 June 2018

The dance of the soul! A beautiful poem.

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Aarzoo Mehek 14 June 2018

Thank you so much

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 June 2018

Heart's love! ! High reason up! Inner self and joy; Harmony with the muse of the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aarzoo Mehek 05 June 2018

Glad you liked it. Thanks for reading.

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 June 2018

Hi Aarzoo, Happy to see you back on ph. Lovely poem. The sense of elation, Happiness beautifully expressed. A 10+++

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Aarzoo Mehek 05 June 2018

Thank you for appreciating my work.

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Nudershada Cabanes 04 June 2018

Fantastic. I can feel the rapturous feeling..Well penned verse Aarzoo.10 Nudershada

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Aarzoo Mehek 04 June 2018

So let's dance to the tune of heart :) Thank you for reading the poem Nudershada. Blessings.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 June 2018

Aarzoo, such a heartwarming poem....10+++++

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Aarzoo Mehek 04 June 2018

Glad you like it Bernard. Keep smiling.

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