When my heart, mind and soul
synched in harmony
my heart ruptured in rhythmic dance.
My whole being swirled in ecstasy of god.
© Aarzoo Mehek
Short and sweet write with words of charm, pulling one towards ecstasy of God. Loved reading it.
Captivating one. Though this poem is in brief yet it has poetic charmness. The theme is nice. The photograph you have provided is captivating too. Thanks for sharing.
I can feel the rupture of the poetic heart in rhythmic dance! A short elegant poem with powerful poetic expression! Appreciated…..10
This harmony is hard to achieve, but once achieved it will lift one to a celestial plane when one feels so light and buoyant! A kind of levitation! ! The poem and the pictorial illustration.... both are equally captivating! A sure 10. Glad to see you back after a long interval!
it's always nice to read your valuable feedback. Thank you so much. Glad to be back among my friends.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi Aarzoo, Happy to see you back on ph. Lovely poem. The sense of elation, Happiness beautifully expressed. A 10+++