Wednesday, May 7, 2014

Harmony Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ma...
you sit contented,
sleeping on and off,
creeping gradually
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Kevin Patrick 26 June 2014

Beautiful stuff, as you say this was harmonious, although a little bittersweet, I don't know why but that second and third stanzas are really sad. Thank you for painting this scene its very touching

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Sally P. P. 04 May 2020

Thanks for your lovely comment, Kevin.

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