Wednesday, February 13, 2013

Harmattan Comments

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Whistling foggy wind blows
From the sahara desert in Africa
Across the savannah grassland
Deep down into the tropical rain forests
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Babatunde Aremu
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Bri Edwards 17 February 2013

i too have no plans to travel in africa......especially now that i see your area, at least, has unwelcoming winds! thanks for the warning. and thanks for sharing. i will send more comments via a message.

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Roseann Shawiak 15 February 2013

Really nice. I can just imagine being there with the wind blowing, very descriptive.

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Ruth Walters 14 February 2013

What a wonderful poem, Babatunde. I probably will never go to Africa but in this poem, you have brought the taste to my lips as if I am there. Only in my dreams have I walked through a tropical rain forest or felt the heat of such strong sunshine. It must be hard to combat that dusty wind, I would have to wear something to cover my face. How exciting, thank you for the poem. I have saved it to my computer under your name for safe keeping.

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