Rajaram Ramachandran

Rajaram Ramachandran

Chennai born, now at Juhu, Mumbai, India
Friday, August 1, 2008

(harichandran) 04 The King's Wedding (I) Comments

Rating: 3.3

After paying tax, other kings left.
King Harichandran then kept
For counseling a few courtiers
On some important matters.
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Rajaram Ramachandran
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Sylvaonyema Uba 26 April 2018

For sleep, went everyone Good use of quatrain. Sylva

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It was time for the sun To set in the west then. At the river bank site They settled for the night... great leend story and good write...

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When did King Harichandran live? .Also Cupid is the Roman name for the Love god.I know he's a very ancient diety named Eros or Phanes-was he included in the ancient myths of India. What is a bund? Thanks.10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 October 2008

Aha! What a nice composition. Love it. 10+

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Sathyanarayana M V S 15 August 2008

Going on very interestingly. As i already stated it is very difficult to form a structure to this kind poetry. But it is amazing Sir you achieved more than perfectly. sathya narayana

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Sandra Fowler 01 August 2008

Beautiful, descriptive lines. A tale both pleasing to the eyes and to the senses. Harichandran falls in love with what what he is told about Chandramathi without ever seeing her. I stand amazed by this. Very romantic. But the best lines are the last lines.. I can see Harichandran in my mind's eye lying wakeful in the bright moonlight thinking of his love. Very appealing, Rajaram. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Rajaram Ramachandran

Rajaram Ramachandran

Chennai born, now at Juhu, Mumbai, India
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