Rajaram Ramachandran

Rajaram Ramachandran

Chennai born, now at Juhu, Mumbai, India
Wednesday, July 30, 2008

(harichandran) 02 The Famous Kingdom Comments

Rating: 3.3

The Sky

When the milk ocean was churned,
Venomous dark, the blue sky turned.
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Beautiful description of a heavenly paradise.A ten from me! ! ! ! !

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Sathyanarayana M V S 11 August 2008

The descriptions are so profound I feel reading a Sanskrit epic or a great Kavyam in Telugu. Sir the adotion of this style, which I feel is so difficult, u have achieved with great ease. Kudos sathya narayana

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Sandra Fowler 30 July 2008

Your famous kingdom sounds like a paradise on earth.Reading these beautiful lines you have created is very soothing to the soul and spirit. Excellent use of both simile and metaphor.It is a pleasure to give you a ten. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Rajaram Ramachandran

Rajaram Ramachandran

Chennai born, now at Juhu, Mumbai, India
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