The Sky
When the milk ocean was churned,
Venomous dark, the blue sky turned.
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The descriptions are so profound I feel reading a Sanskrit epic or a great Kavyam in Telugu. Sir the adotion of this style, which I feel is so difficult, u have achieved with great ease. Kudos sathya narayana
Your famous kingdom sounds like a paradise on earth.Reading these beautiful lines you have created is very soothing to the soul and spirit. Excellent use of both simile and metaphor.It is a pleasure to give you a ten. Warmest regards, Sandra
Beautiful description of a heavenly paradise.A ten from me! ! ! ! !