Friday, September 15, 2017

Hares And The Tortoises-008 (Haiku) Comments

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The race has begun

Hares have trillions on warfare, and space journeys
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Rajendra Rout 15 September 2017

Hares have trillions on warfare, and space journeys Tortoises feed on bread from grass. What a line of disparity between sections of people!

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Suratha Kumar Rout 15 September 2017

Tortoises feed on bread from grass. The poor can't compete with their rich counterparts. Thanks for sharing this poem.10

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D Priyanka Singh 15 September 2017

Hares have trillions on warfare, and space journeys Tortoises feed on bread from grass. Nicely compared. 10+++

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Biswa Ranjan Nayak 15 September 2017

Tortoises feed on bread from grass. Such a disparity. Tragic. Nice poem. 10+

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 15 September 2017

Hares have trillions on warfare, and space journeys Tortoises feed on bread from grass. Beautiful poem. 10

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