Tuesday, September 23, 2008

Hardly The Time Comments

Rating: 3.8

For the first Couple years of my life,
I thought you the one
But I was wrong
I looked up to you my inspiration
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josie iorianni
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Rakhi Jayashankar 01 October 2008

a gr8 work a girl of 14 yrs of age

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Greenwolfe 1962 25 September 2008

This is a very shallow poem without much to offer I am afraid. GW62

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Ian Singer 23 September 2008

dude you are a good poet keep writing

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