Thursday, February 16, 2006

Hardened Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was a man
who saw too much.
Felt too much pain.
Had too little luck
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Logan Rheinst
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John Tiong Chunghoo 23 April 2006

great poem. nowonder they pin so much hope on you.

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***** ********* 16 February 2006

Spot on Logan! lol A sudden glaring moment of realisation in a poem. Perfect 10 from Tai, trying not to laugh!

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Logan Rheinst

Logan Rheinst

Rochester NY
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