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fine poem! a 10+ from me......thanks

This such a good poem, Daisy. I have to say, it brought tears to my eyes reading it...I especially like the first stanza, the way you begin it with 'Red' is startlingly effective...A little history for you, a Greek poet, Pindar, established the prototype for an ode a long time ago. There are various forms of it. Yours is more like an English ode. I know you poured your heart out with this poem. Keep them coming!

brought a tear to my eye too.