Hard To Open Up Without Being Judged Poem by mona martinez

Hard To Open Up Without Being Judged

Rating: 5.0


saying what i feel is hard to do,
i don't open up much,
what's the point?

theonly personwho gets to judge,
is me!
other people don't need to know,
what i'm going through,
plus more,

so why do i need to open up?
to say what's on my mind,
when the only judge is me?
wouldn't you say?

it's wrong to judge a person,
you know nothing about,
just to find,
nothing you said,
never seemed to be true?

could this be why?
saying what's on my mind is hard?
because people like to pick out,
everything that don't expain,
who you are and everything you can be?

wouldn't it be time,
to stop judging people for,
who they are on the outside,
and just look within,
where all of the true beauty is?
Copyright © 2009
10-09-09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shelly Shelly 24 October 2009

a very hard feeling for society.. wouldn't it be time, to stop judging people for, who they are on the outside, and just look within and true it is...society dont have the authority to judge one whom it doesnt know.. nice piece..10

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Rakesh Bedi 22 October 2009

it ia all right, mona, i understand your lesson of judging people. But, are you away from this humane trait, dear? ? ? plz be honest n true to yourself....

6 3 Reply

this scores a 10 in my book

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