Sunday, February 1, 2009

Hard Scrabble Bubble Gum Comments

Rating: 2.6

Her face was hard
and it had marks on it
and she was smoking her cigarette
when I walked in
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Lonnie Hicks
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Myrtle Thomas 01 February 2009

Oh I loved this, I could picture it in my mind.I liked the concept of depicting her as hard bubble gum.Very good

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