James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Friday, March 8, 2019

Hard Reality Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a wood that's lush and deep and green I sat,
Looking at a path that leads from left to right.
A single lonely figure that was I, and here the fog
Was moist and warm and white.
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James McLain
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Bri Edwards 30 April 2019

something tells me this is a bit philosophical. hmm? a bush, with leaves green or brown, or none at all, is still a bush! ! ! grab ahold of it and don't let it ever loose. this poem is easy to read and peaceful, even though it IS (maybe) philosophical. i don't philosophize much. there's not much money 'in it'. bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 March 2019

In stillness water flew with grassy green mountains and mist unveiled the reality. This poem is very brilliantly penned. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely poem.10

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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