Thursday, January 26, 2012

Hard Choices Comments

Rating: 4.0

A path is laid out ahead,
it forks before your feet.
A decision filled with dread,
uncertain of what you’ll meet.
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Jojoba Mansell
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Jasbir Chatterjee 26 March 2014

liked this poem very much...

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Carsten Thomsen 26 January 2012

Another fine piece of work from you. Again, end rhyhes that doesnt hurt the feel or meaning of the poem. Good Job

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