Wednesday, November 6, 2024

Harbour Of Lost Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

In this harbour of lost dreams
Life is steady, so it seems
Steady, pulling at my sleeve
Steady, calling 'Don't believe,
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Paul Miller
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Koffi B Sossou 05 December 2024

This is a well-crafted poem depicting a heart break.

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Paul Miller 18 December 2024

Thank you so much Koffi. Just an old song I wrote years ago, put it up here to encourage myself to write again. Very encouraged by you comment, thanks.

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Beautiful song. Excellent rhythm and rhyme. A wee bit melancholic. But loved it. I would love to listen to it in your voice. Why don't you share a video? Thank you. And Congratulations, for this poem is selected Poem Of The Day today. Top score and atb

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Paul Miller 18 December 2024

Thank you so much for your kind, encouraging words.

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