The harbour lights are beckoning,
Our stout boat is riding high,
By the distant view, we're reckoning,
We are nearly home and dry.
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I Love Poems about boats, sea, docks, sea breeze, harbors...And this piece is absolutely exceptional...Through well placed imagery, you have depicted This scene with such genuinity...Great Work as can always be expected by you, young Poetess E.'''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
The contrast between the unpredictability of the ocean to the familiarity of home is vividly portrayed. A well crafted write Ernestine. Warmest wishes Justine.
Excellent poem, Earnestine! It's a good feeling coming home! A 10.
Dear Ernestine, Well styled and well-crafted with excellent use of rhyme and meter. Best, Hugh
You sum up life's journey so well Ernestine. Lovely imagery and phrasing.
There is much in this that offers such hope, I can only hope that this is a reflection of how you are feeling or will feel in time to come, Love duncan
Another great nautical write, love the imagery of the harbour lights. Andrew x