Friday, April 21, 2006

Harbour Lights Comments

Rating: 5.0

The harbour lights are beckoning,
Our stout boat is riding high,
By the distant view, we're reckoning,
We are nearly home and dry.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 24 April 2008

Another great nautical write, love the imagery of the harbour lights. Andrew x

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 11 September 2006

I Love Poems about boats, sea, docks, sea breeze, harbors...And this piece is absolutely exceptional...Through well placed imagery, you have depicted This scene with such genuinity...Great Work as can always be expected by you, young Poetess E.'''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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R H 23 April 2006

The contrast between the unpredictability of the ocean to the familiarity of home is vividly portrayed. A well crafted write Ernestine. Warmest wishes Justine.

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Nick Percowycz 22 April 2006

Excellent poem, Earnestine! It's a good feeling coming home! A 10.

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Hugh Cobb 21 April 2006

Dear Ernestine, Well styled and well-crafted with excellent use of rhyme and meter. Best, Hugh

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Daniel Tyler 21 April 2006

You sum up life's journey so well Ernestine. Lovely imagery and phrasing.

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Duncan Wyllie 21 April 2006

There is much in this that offers such hope, I can only hope that this is a reflection of how you are feeling or will feel in time to come, Love duncan

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