Monday, June 23, 2014

Harakiri. Comments

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Thank you all
For helping me decide
The way to go
Wrong or right
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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi
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Lenny Camacho 23 June 2014

Harakiri was meant to help men recover or keep some honor with an honorable death... it was a beautiful death for a samurai warrior... although your poem is nice and has the desire effect (pretty perturbing) , you might think about reconsidering the tittle...

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